This is beautiful; I wonder where they're going? Looks like a procession... Also, what- what is this? 'I'm trying to learn from my mistakes'? WHAT MISTAKES?! These are literally some of THE MOST beautiful things I have ever SEEN!
This is just a fantastic concept,. I often see nighttime pictures with such excellent lighting effects, but you've taken it a step further by composing this setting in the failing light of dusk. I love how the light reflects off the water, it's truly remarkable piece.
Really like the value grouping and line composition in this!
Perhaps would be stronger if the hues for the fire were more desaturated as they recede into the background. Perhaps a little sharper edge fidelity in the focal points (foreground characters and the buildings).
*might* look better with an ever so slightly greater value separation between the bottom right shoreline and the building group~